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Orage	Earth Mission 68k	Lead	[-]
Posts: 2 (2007-04-29 17:45:08) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	Hello everybody. I have coded a game called Earth Mission. My program is available at www.ticalc.org/archives/files/fileinfo/398/39801.html An animation is available here : vincent.corfdir.online.fr/fichiers/images%20Ti/earth89anim_1.gif I'm waiting for any comment or suggestion. I did the game in english, but as I am not very good, thank you to tell me if you find any mistake in the game [EDIT by Kevin Kofler: Changed link to point to the fileinfo page because ticalc.org doesn't allow direct linking to files.]
Kevin Kofler	Re: Earth Mission 68k	#1	[-]
Posts: 7059 (2007-04-29 19:39:35) Admin Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	Welcome to the shared TICT/TIGCC message board. When linking to ticalc.org, please link to the fileinfo page, not directly to the file, because ticalc.org detects deep links to files and drops you to the directory instead of the specific file, whereas deep links to fileinfo pages are allowed. As for your detecting mistakes in your English, it would probably be easiest with the source code...
Orage	Re: Earth Mission 68k	#2	[-]
Posts: 2 (2007-04-30 17:27:17) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	Thank you and sorry for the link. The text is : (during introduction) "earth","nowadays", "earth's been invaded","by an unknown forces", "now a missile is","approching us", "the nsa chosed you","to destroy", "each ennemy\'s radar","set up in our planet", "to allows nasa to","send a conter attack" (at the end) "three... two...","one...", "conter missile","is approching", "mission","completed"
Lionel Debroux	Re: Earth Mission 68k	#3	[-]
Posts: 3066 (2007-04-30 17:41:21) Former Admin Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	Hi Orage > "send a conter attack", "conter missile" "counter"
lachprog	Re: Earth Mission 68k	#4	[-]
Posts: 28 (2007-04-30 22:33:15) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	Hi Orange, cool game! approching => approaching by an unknown forces => by an unknown force
Kevin Kofler	Re: Earth Mission 68k	#5	[-]
Posts: 7059 (2007-05-01 06:34:52) Admin Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	chosed -> chose ennemy -> enemy I assume this is an all-caps font, if it's not, some letters should also be capitalized (Earth, NSA, NASA).
Zarel	Re: Earth Mission 68k	#6	[-]
Posts: 4 (2007-07-24 17:25:08) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Report Post	This would probably be better: (during introduction) "earth","today", "earth has been invaded","by unknown forces", "now a missile is","approaching us", "the nsa chose you","to destroy", "each enemy\'s radar","set up in our planet", "to allow nasa to","send a counter attack" (at the end) "three... two...","one...", "counter missile","approaching", "mission","completed"

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